The summary was a quickly over read with some brainstorming but mostly free-writing. The feedback I got was that due to the length of the article I had to go find a new one that had more depth to it. Which I did find one that more or less conveyed the same topic. I tried to paraphrase important parts in order not to plagiarism though I am not well into summaries so I will suspect a not very good grade at all. Definitely showed my flaws which will need to be improved on.
My first post
Well as of now this blog is rather dry and empty. Besides the categories that have been inserted. I hope in the future I will add more categories that are also rather dynamic and unique than the general categories that I have created today. Also I have one or two posts which does include this one up, a number that will be greatly increased over time and that also contain a better sense of proper grammar usage. Not to mention I hope that I will not repeatably use the same few words and expand to a more college setting I still have the default picture set up on here. Which is a rather cute cactus on a table top though it is a rather bland and a feeling of being closed in picture that also is set in a urban setting. Hopefully I will soon be able to change that with a more open photo with perhaps a photo from the outdoors such as a waterfall or some mountains. A forest does create a sense of mystery with and a sounding of nature though I do favor more of a beach type of setting with clear waters. This way help the blog by conveying a more open and dynamic feeling. I also would like to change this black tone on the side of the site. It is a rather bland color which I could replace with a brighter color or perhaps a version of blue that fits in with Tumblr.
Hello world!
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