{"id":134,"date":"2017-12-14T17:37:51","date_gmt":"2017-12-14T23:37:51","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/eportfolios.isucomm.iastate.edu\/ctconrad\/?p=134"},"modified":"2017-12-14T17:37:51","modified_gmt":"2017-12-14T23:37:51","slug":"reflection-on-writing-revision","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/eportfolios.isucomm.iastate.edu\/ctconrad\/2017\/12\/14\/reflection-on-writing-revision\/","title":{"rendered":"Reflection on writing revision"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>A lot of the revisioning was looking at sentences where the words did not make sense or sounded quite weird. There was not really any additions in a sense besides moving a couple of words around. A lot of it was more of compressing certain parts of a sentence or replacing or having an idea of replacing words that may fit the essay overall. There was some portions that ddi not need the a change which was when the essay dove into the possible bias of the author. In reality though I thought perhaps and probably for the best if the whole essay was to be rewritten for a better overall experience.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>A lot of the revisioning was looking at sentences where the words did not make sense or sounded quite weird. There was not really any additions in a sense besides moving a couple of words around. A lot of it was more of compressing certain parts of a sentence or replacing or having an idea &hellip; <\/p>\n<p class=\"link-more\"><a href=\"https:\/\/eportfolios.isucomm.iastate.edu\/ctconrad\/2017\/12\/14\/reflection-on-writing-revision\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading<span class=\"screen-reader-text\"> &#8220;Reflection on writing revision&#8221;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":10204,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[8],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-134","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-reflections"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/eportfolios.isucomm.iastate.edu\/ctconrad\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/134","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/eportfolios.isucomm.iastate.edu\/ctconrad\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/eportfolios.isucomm.iastate.edu\/ctconrad\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/eportfolios.isucomm.iastate.edu\/ctconrad\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/10204"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/eportfolios.isucomm.iastate.edu\/ctconrad\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=134"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/eportfolios.isucomm.iastate.edu\/ctconrad\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/134\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":141,"href":"https:\/\/eportfolios.isucomm.iastate.edu\/ctconrad\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/134\/revisions\/141"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/eportfolios.isucomm.iastate.edu\/ctconrad\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=134"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/eportfolios.isucomm.iastate.edu\/ctconrad\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=134"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/eportfolios.isucomm.iastate.edu\/ctconrad\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=134"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}