- Which areas need the most improvement?
– Making sure to use more in-text citations, because sometimes even though I think that because I know something I think that whoever is reading what I’m writing would obviously know what I’m talking about but like in this piece maybe someone who doesn’t follow sports would wonder where I got most of my information from.
- Where have I changed my mind about anything I wrote earlier, and how can I incorporate that changed thinking?
– I could’ve actually made a few stronger points about the situation and have a better introduction as well.
- Can I see a better way to arrange the ideas in my new version?
– I don’t so, I think I put my ideas mostly in an order of events so that the reader was able to understand the domino effect of the problem.
- How can this piece better meet the outcomes for the assignment?
– I need to have a stronger introduction and conclusion.