I felt as if I did a nice job on the textual analysis essay. The wording may have needed some small tweaking though over all grammar did not seem to be much of a problem. Perhaps maybe one area that may have needed some extra information was about the author views that was rather “low-key” inserted into an article that was supposedly to be a rather political free and factual information piece. Perhaps maybe I should have put that as the first topic that was to be discussed regarding ethos though to be fair the author did do a fair job when it came t the actual topic about the tuition hike and the various benefits and disadvantages that have come about such action. Also the thesis and the conclusion would maybe benefit from being more fleshed out or perhaps to be rewritten. I would say the quotes were fairly well integrated with none being dropped. The feedback I got back about my initial draft was that I mostly needed to put a bit more emphasis on how the author built up credibility in her article before using some questionable quotes and also incorporating ethos in it. Both which I have done so overall I believe the essay is of fair quality.