Planning textual rhetorical Analysis

Well I came in with two full pages of writing and well it is not final but I have gotten good responses on it. Some minor changes here and there and maybe a little rework but it should be done in time to turn in.

Summary Planning post

The summary was a quickly over read with some brainstorming but mostly free-writing. The feedback I got was that due to the length of the article I had to go find a new one that had more depth to it. Which I did find one that more or less conveyed the same topic. I tried to paraphrase important parts in order not to plagiarism though I am not well into summaries so I will suspect a not very good grade at all. Definitely showed my flaws which will need to be improved on.