The feedback I got is mostly positive in way thought I would just have to expand on the idea of the sue of pathos or ethos in my analysis.
Summary reflection
I am going be blunt is that my summary was not the best. Its rather hard to remember when i actually had written a summary before. Usually my papers are well either DBQs or some paper that has a point i need to prove or answer, not just a basic summary. To few in details and in a rushed form. I realize this afterward and now I am just awaiting the disappointment of my professor. The structure would definitely need to be worked on along with several key components. I did not help that I had to find the article again after forgetting to favorite it. Next time the paper will be more orderly structured and more professional. A more detailed bullet point summary before the actual summary may also greatly help. Also transitions will need some working on along with my thesis as well they have not really improved since my days of writing DBQs for APUSH.