- I chose my campus place based on the fact that I currently work there. It’s important to me because it’s my first job.
- I expressed the fact that this is my first job experience in the second or third paragraph. But in hindsight, I may have placed too much emphasis on myself and what this place means to me, and neglected to write on what it meant to the whole campus.
- It hasn’t.
- I’ve learnt that I’m not as good of a writer as I once thought. I dove in headfirst into this assignment without much planning or preparation beforehand, thinking my language command would make up for it, and the quality of my writing suffered. I do not believed it has worked well for this assignment, obvious as it is, by the grade that I received.
