In this revised version of my original draft, some additions were made to the second paragraph, in that, more emphasis was made on the the importance of Intercultural communication, and an additional website was cited as a source to support this. Then, I expanded on the conclusion on this paper because I do not believe what I had initially written was sufficient to summarize the paper. However, I did not remove much, if at all, of this paper because I believe all the information that I’ve put in the paper were necessary and justified. The data that I cited for the importance of experience abroad was necessary to support the claim that I made in the fourth paragraph about the qualities that employers look for. I have also decided to rework the thesis statement to better specify the main point of this paper.