I felt like I came in today with a pretty well developed paper. I still felt like there was something from my article but was hoping that would be brought to light from the peer review. As my group members were reviewing my paper and giving feedback, they brought to my attention that I should add more quotes and use more of the vocabulary to help create a better analysis. With this, I hope to consider these notes and come back on Tuesday with a well-rounded analysis.
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