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12.14.2017 by Grace // Leave a Comment

“reACT​ ​gallery​ ​hopes​ ​to​ ​generate​ ​conversations​ ​in​ ​community”:​ ​A​ ​Rhetorical​ ​Analysis

Parker​ ​Reed​ ​wrote​ ​the​ ​article​ ​“reACT​ ​gallery​ ​hopes​ ​to​ ​generate​ ​conversations​ ​in community”,​ ​published​ ​in​ ​2017​ ​in​ ​​The Daily,​ ​to​ ​bring​ ​awareness​ ​to​ ​Iowa​ ​State​ ​University’s reACT​ ​Gallery.​ ​Using​ ​techniques​ ​such​ ​as​ ​presenting​ ​information​ ​in​ ​a​ ​logical​ ​manner,​ ​including photographs,​ ​writing​ ​in​ ​an​ ​informative​ ​tone,​ ​and​ ​citing​ ​credible​ ​sources,​ ​Reed​ ​encourages readers​ ​to​ ​visit​ ​the​ ​reACT​ ​Gallery.

Reed​ ​starts​ ​the​ ​article​ ​with​ ​a​ ​photograph​ ​from​ ​the​ ​kickoff​ ​event​ ​which​ ​announces​ ​the gallery’s​ ​theme:​ ​leadership.​ ​This​ ​provides​ ​an​ ​idea​ ​of​ ​the​ ​content​ ​an​ ​attendee​ ​will​ ​see​ ​when visiting​ ​the​ ​gallery.​ ​This​ ​also​ ​enhances​ ​the​ ​article​ ​by​ ​providing​ ​visual​ ​content​ ​for​ ​the​ ​reader.

The​ ​first​ ​sentence​ ​is​ ​a​ ​general​ ​statement​ ​explaining​ ​the​ ​typical​ ​purpose​ ​of​ ​a​ ​museum followed​ ​by​ ​how​ ​University​ ​Museums​ ​is​ ​approaching​ ​a​ ​new​ ​point​ ​of​ ​view.​ ​This​ ​is​ ​different​ ​from the​ ​traditional​ ​viewing​ ​style​ ​of​ ​a​ ​museum​ ​and​ ​sparks​ ​interest​ ​in​ ​the​ ​content.​ ​Reed​ ​then​ ​quotes Sarah​ ​Nusser,​ ​Vice​ ​President​ ​for​ ​Research​ ​for​ ​Iowa​ ​State,​ ​increasing​ ​his​ ​credibility.​ ​Reed​ ​ends the​ ​paragraph​ ​with​ ​Nusser’s​ ​question,​ ​”How​ ​is​ ​that​ ​affecting​ ​us?”​ ​This​ ​prompts​ ​the​ ​audience​ ​to ask​ ​themselves​ ​and​ ​it​ ​serves​ ​as​ ​a​ ​transition​ ​into​ ​the​ ​interactive​ ​portion​ ​of​ ​the​ ​gallery.1

Next,​ ​Reed​ ​uses​ ​the​ ​purpose​ ​of​ ​the​ ​reACT​ ​Gallery​ ​as​ ​a​ ​transition​ ​from​ ​Nusser’s​ ​quotes​ ​to Nancy​ ​Gebhart’s​ ​quotes.​ ​Gebhart​ ​boosts​ ​Reed’s​ ​credibility​ ​as​ ​she​ ​is​ ​the​ ​Educator​ ​of​ ​Visual Literacy​ ​and​ ​Learning​ ​for​ ​University​ ​Museums.​ ​Reed​ ​also​ ​ends​ ​this​ ​paragraph​ ​with​ ​a​ ​question, “I’ll​ ​always​ ​ask​ ​them,​ ​‘What​ ​did​ ​you​ ​see​ ​that​ ​made​ ​you​ ​say​ ​that?’”​ ​This​ ​again​ ​connects​ ​to​ ​the idea​ ​of​ ​the​ ​viewer​ ​interacting​ ​with​ ​the​ ​artwork.2

Reed​ ​follows​ ​this​ ​up​ ​with​ ​a​ ​photograph​ ​of​ ​a​ ​people​ ​viewing​ ​the​ ​artwork​ ​at​ ​the​ ​kickoff event​ ​on​ ​September​ ​5​th​.​ ​This​ ​leads​ ​into​ ​Reed’s​ ​personal​ ​experience​ ​of​ ​the​ ​kickoff​ ​event.​ ​This also​ ​includes​ ​the​ ​location​ ​of​ ​the​ ​gallery,​ ​Morrill​ ​Hall.​ ​Reed​ ​concedes​ ​that​ ​the​ ​gallery​ ​is​ ​still designed​ ​as​ ​a​ ​traditional​ ​museum​ ​would​ ​be​ ​with​ ​display​ ​cases​ ​but​ ​emphasises4​ ​the​ ​level​ ​of interaction​ ​by​ ​saying​ ​the​ ​gallery​ ​“encouraged​ ​attendees​ ​to​ ​voice​ ​their​ ​own​ ​opinions.”​ ​Nusser’s next​ ​quote​ ​backs​ ​this​ ​up​ ​by​ ​counting​ ​on​ ​the​ ​attendees​ ​participation.3

Now,​ ​Reed​ ​explains​ ​the​ ​purpose​ ​of​ ​the​ ​reACT​ ​Gallery.​ ​This​ ​includes​ ​the​ ​way​ ​this​ ​display is​ ​different​ ​from​ ​typical​ ​museums.​ ​Viewers​ ​are​ ​able​ ​to​ ​leave​ ​post-it​ ​notes​ ​with​ ​their​ ​thoughts​ ​and feelings​ ​concerning​ ​the​ ​artwork.​ ​Reed​ ​uses​ ​this​ ​to​ ​showcase​ ​the​ ​unique​ ​quality​ ​of​ ​this​ ​gallery​ ​and encourage​ ​the​ ​reader​ ​to​ ​connect​ ​with​ ​his​ ​own​ ​article.​ ​Reed​ ​also​ ​mentions​ ​that​ ​there​ ​is​ ​a​ ​podium available​ ​for​ ​people​ ​to​ ​speak​ ​and​ ​how​ ​Iowa​ ​State​ ​scholars​ ​have​ ​commentary​ ​featured​ ​throughout the​ ​gallery.​ ​Reed​ ​defines​ ​Iowa​ ​State​ ​scholars​ ​to​ ​be,​ ​“any​ ​Iowa​ ​State​ ​student,​ ​staff​ ​and/or​ ​faculty member,”​ ​and​ ​further​ ​encourages​ ​students​ ​to​ ​interact​ ​by​ ​pointing​ ​out​ ​that​ ​“any​ ​scholar​ ​is​ ​eligible to​ ​submit​ ​their​ ​opinions​ ​on​ ​a​ ​specific​ ​piece​ ​of​ ​art.”

The​ ​last​ ​photograph​ ​in​ ​this​ ​writing​ ​shows​ ​a​ ​man​ ​playing​ ​improvised​ ​pieces​ ​on​ ​his saxophone​ ​based​ ​on​ ​the​ ​artwork​ ​in​ ​the​ ​gallery.​ ​Reed​ ​uses​ ​this​ ​as​ ​a​ ​visual​ ​cue​ ​for​ ​the​ ​various ways​ ​this​ ​gallery​ ​encourages​ ​viewer​ ​participation.​ ​Reed​ ​follows​ ​the​ ​photo​ ​by​ ​quoting​ ​Aspen Pflanz,​ ​Education​ ​Intern​ ​for​ ​University​ ​Museums.​ ​As​ ​a​ ​third​ ​source,​ ​Pflanz​ ​further​ ​increases Reed’s​ ​credibility.​ ​Being​ ​the​ ​last​ ​quote,​ ​Pflanz​ ​also​ ​adds​ ​another​ ​point​ ​of​ ​view​ ​for​ ​how​ ​the gallery​ ​is​ ​different​ ​from​ ​other​ ​museums.​ ​As​ ​a​ ​transition​ ​from​ ​the​ ​persuasive​ ​writing​ ​to​ ​the informative​ ​writing,​ ​Reed​ ​includes​ ​September’s​ ​theme​ ​with​ ​a​ ​little​ ​summary.​ ​He​ ​ends​ ​the​ ​article with​ ​two​ ​informative​ ​paragraphs.​ ​The​ ​first​ ​has​ ​the​ ​end​ ​date​ ​for​ ​the​ ​“Leadership”​ ​gallery​ ​and​ ​the galleries​ ​for​ ​the​ ​rest​ ​of​ ​the​ ​school​ ​year.​ ​The​ ​second​ ​paragraph​ ​has​ ​the​ ​hours​ ​of​ ​operation​ ​and concludes​ ​with,​ ​“The​ ​event​ ​is​ ​free​ ​to​ ​attend.”​ ​This​ ​last​ ​sentence​ ​is​ ​the​ ​final​ ​hook​ ​to​ ​attract students’​ ​attention​ ​and​ ​persuade​ ​them​ ​to​ ​visit​ ​the​ ​reACT​ ​Gallery.

Parker​ ​Reed’s​ ​article,​ ​“reACT​ ​gallery​ ​hopes​ ​to​ ​generate​ ​conversations​ ​in​ ​community”, sparks​ ​interest​ ​in​ ​Iowa​ ​State​ ​University’s​ ​campus​ ​gallery.​ ​By​ ​presenting​ ​information​ ​in​ ​a​ ​logical manner,​ ​including​ ​photographs,​ ​writing​ ​in​ ​an​ ​informative​ ​tone,​ ​and​ ​citing​ ​credible​ ​sources,​ ​Reed informs​ ​and​ ​encourages​ ​students​ ​to​ ​visit​ ​the​ ​reACT​ ​Gallery.


Reflection

1Here, I would revise this last sentence: By comparing the reACT gallery to traditional museums Reed prompts the reader to reflect on their previous experiences with museums. This builds a connection between Reed and the reader. This question also serves as a transition into the interactive portion of the gallery.
2Instead of saying, “This​ ​again​ ​connects​ ​to​ ​the idea​ ​of​ ​the​ ​viewer​ ​interacting​ ​with​ ​the​ ​artwork.” I have revised this paragraph to conclude as follows: This question connects the quotes back to the idea of the reACT gallery integrating the viewers. Reed also uses this as an opportunity help explain the purpose of the gallery.
3My revision here is to add on: Nusser’s quote not only builds credibility, it reinforces the idea that the reACT gallery is worth noticing. By including Nusser stating, “It isn’t a place where you come, look, say ‘That was nice’ and walk away,” Reed is able to provide logical evidence as to why readers should visit.
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