A reflection on your written writing can go here, hyperlinking specific portions of this to a original version of one of your papers and your revised versions. This should be as thorough as possible, delineating your specific choices you made to your newer version.
Include images of your original, maybe screenshots to highlight some comments from your instructor. This can help add depth to your revision reflection. Below you will find some filler text to demonstrate what the page might look like overall. Your final reflection on your written communication should be thoughtful and thorough.
Let me see your identification. You don’t need to see his identification. We don’t need to see his identification. These are not the droids your looking for. These are not the droids we’re looking for. He can go about his business. You can go about your business. Move along. Move along. Move along.
He is here… Obi-Wan Kenobi! What makes you think so? A tremor in the Force. The last time I felt it was in the presence of my old master. Surely he must be dead by now. Don’t underestimate the power of the Force. The Jedi are extinct, their fire has gone out of the universe. You, my friend, are all that’s left of their religion. Yes. Governor Tarkin, we have an emergency alert in detention block A A-twenty-three. The princess! Put all sections on alert!
There she is. See-Threepio, do you copy? For the moment. Uh, we’re in the main hangar across from the ship. We’re right above you. Stand by. You came in that thing? You’re braver that I thought. Nice! Come on! It’s them! Blast them! Get back to the ship! Where are you going? Come back! He certainly has courage. What good will it do us if he gets himself killed? Come on! I think we took a wrong turn. There’s no lock! That oughta hold it for a while. Quick, we’ve got to get across. Find the control that extends the bridge. Oh, I think I just blasted it. They’re coming through! Here, hold this. Here they come! For luck!
Luke, take these two over to the garage, will you? I want you to have both of them cleaned up before dinner. But I was going into Toshi Station to pick up some power converters… You can waste time with your friends when your chores are done. Now come on, get to it! All right, come on! And the red one, come on. Well, come on, Red, let’s go. Uncle Owen… Yeah?This R2 unit has a bad motivator. Look! Hey, what’re you trying to push on us? Excuse me, sir, but that R2 unit is in prime condition. A real bargain. Uncle Owen… Yeah? What about that one? What about that blue one? We’ll take that one. Yeah, take it away.
Holding her is dangerous. If word of this gets out, it could generate sympathy for the Rebellion in the senate. I have traced the Rebel spies to her. Now she is my only link to find their secret base! She’ll die before she tells you anything. Leave that to me. Send a distress signal and then inform the senate that all aboard were killed! Lord Vader, the battle station plans are not aboard this ship! And no transmissions were made. An escape pod was jettisoned during the fighting, but no life forms were aboard. She must have hidden the plans in the escape pod. Send a detachment down to retrieve them. See to it personally, Commander. There’ll be no one to stop us this time. Yes, sir.