Written

Written

At the beginning of the semester, my writing wasn’t as strong as it is now. I had a lot of trouble with citing, above all. In this assignment, assignment #3: Exploring a Campus Program or Organization: Public Document and Profile, I didn’t understand how strong a thesis to be and where to put it. I revised this document thoroughly before uploading it but it still seemed to have many errors. The thesis was not clear enough and the main points in each paragraph were not visible. Information was repeated more than it should be and needed a proper conclusion. I also didn’t connect accurately with the university and that could also use some work.